Post by Lota on Apr 6, 2011 23:19:32 GMT -5
Ok, I am completely stuck on this and a few other details I'll explain at the bottom. This is what I have for Chapter 26 so far and am stuck. Any ideas out there?
Well, I am done 25 chapters so far and am running out of ideas (almost). I will be starting another story im calling, Haunted. I have the prologue written and ready for all of you readers out there! So be prepared for Haunted, and enjoy this chapter in the meantime!
~Ren's POV~
You had begun packing the night before. The Hidden Blossom Village elders had apparently been watching Reika, and now that they knew of her departure, they were sending the two of you out to 'eliminate' her and any of her other companions that she'd left with. You knew they were punishing you. What other reason could they have for sending friends out to kill each other? Of course, you were making Aoi stay home so she wouldn't have to suffer further. 'Disposing of' Rei would be your job, and your job alone, though you weren't going to do this their way. Not ever.
~Rei's POV~
"Man, we haven't had a breakfast like this in ages, yeah!" Deidara said through a mouth full of blueberry pancakes and bacon. You glanced at him and he smiled sheepishly, swallowing and washing it down with a tall glass of milk. You giggled at his boyishness and took another bite of pancake.
Sometime later, you were sitting in your room, staring out your window, worrying about your friends. You couldn't stay still at all right now, so you decided to go out to the training room. There were a few of the others out there when you got there, but you ignored them and went to your clearing with your equipment. You heard someone clear their throat directly behind you and you whipped around, heart in your mouth.
"Oh, Sasori! It's you. You startled me." you said, heart still racing. All he did was smirk at you and lean against the tree beside him.
That's all I've got so far. As for the other problems....
I have pairing problems. The main character, Reika, is currently paired with Itachi. (This IS a Naruto fanfic, you know) She has three other potential pairings: Hidan, Deidara, and her childhood friend Ren.
Some people want Hidan to steal Reika away from Itachi, others want Deidara to steal her away. And others want Ren or for her and Itachi to stay together.
Her other childhood friend, Aoi, likes Ren, but Ren is so dense that he doesn't notice it. He likes Reika, but Reika thinks Ren and Aoi should get together.
There will be a confrontation between Ren and Reika and the Akatsuki very soon, and I don't know whether he should get accidentally killed or purposely killed during this, as that could put an exciting twist on things.
I want to pair Aoi with someone else if Ren dies, but I don't know who or when or how, and I don't know what to do with Reika's old apprentice Kaito.
So you see my problems. Any ideas or advice on this?[/b]
Chapter 1-25
Well, I am done 25 chapters so far and am running out of ideas (almost). I will be starting another story im calling, Haunted. I have the prologue written and ready for all of you readers out there! So be prepared for Haunted, and enjoy this chapter in the meantime!
~Ren's POV~
You had begun packing the night before. The Hidden Blossom Village elders had apparently been watching Reika, and now that they knew of her departure, they were sending the two of you out to 'eliminate' her and any of her other companions that she'd left with. You knew they were punishing you. What other reason could they have for sending friends out to kill each other? Of course, you were making Aoi stay home so she wouldn't have to suffer further. 'Disposing of' Rei would be your job, and your job alone, though you weren't going to do this their way. Not ever.
~Rei's POV~
"Man, we haven't had a breakfast like this in ages, yeah!" Deidara said through a mouth full of blueberry pancakes and bacon. You glanced at him and he smiled sheepishly, swallowing and washing it down with a tall glass of milk. You giggled at his boyishness and took another bite of pancake.
~FF 3H~
Sometime later, you were sitting in your room, staring out your window, worrying about your friends. You couldn't stay still at all right now, so you decided to go out to the training room. There were a few of the others out there when you got there, but you ignored them and went to your clearing with your equipment. You heard someone clear their throat directly behind you and you whipped around, heart in your mouth.
"Oh, Sasori! It's you. You startled me." you said, heart still racing. All he did was smirk at you and lean against the tree beside him.
That's all I've got so far. As for the other problems....
I have pairing problems. The main character, Reika, is currently paired with Itachi. (This IS a Naruto fanfic, you know) She has three other potential pairings: Hidan, Deidara, and her childhood friend Ren.
Some people want Hidan to steal Reika away from Itachi, others want Deidara to steal her away. And others want Ren or for her and Itachi to stay together.
Her other childhood friend, Aoi, likes Ren, but Ren is so dense that he doesn't notice it. He likes Reika, but Reika thinks Ren and Aoi should get together.
There will be a confrontation between Ren and Reika and the Akatsuki very soon, and I don't know whether he should get accidentally killed or purposely killed during this, as that could put an exciting twist on things.
I want to pair Aoi with someone else if Ren dies, but I don't know who or when or how, and I don't know what to do with Reika's old apprentice Kaito.
So you see my problems. Any ideas or advice on this?[/b]
Chapter 1-25
